Wednesday, March 06, 2013

Echoes Of Laura's Observation

Inspired by Laura Hegfield's Post Surround Sound
 

Echoes of Laura's Observation 

by Teri H Hoover

Noticing
my breath on the back of my throat. 

Expanding
the bay window vibrates
with the song of the heat pump.
Feeling 

warm air from the heating vent,under the table
Catching
a piece of my hair and tickling my cheek.
Hearing

the recliner squeak in the other room 
as my dog gets more comfortable.
Noticing
something a friend said.




2 comments:

  1. I do hope this latest snow storm missed you.
    We were suppose to get a bunch of snow overnight. But we are in the eye of the storm. We are getting wind and some rain. The snow may arrive later or tomorrow...

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  2. Beautifully constructed poem, rounded, complete and perfect.

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