Wednesday, August 31, 2011

directions


August  31, 2011 Small Stones.
directions  by Teri H Hoover
Margo Roby Prompt- Lanturne


Alone
 without  
the comfort
of you beside
me.



see
without
eye makeup
clearly seeing
sight



up
flying 
in the clouds
without me now 
down



sight 
without 
 faith is blind
 love is waiting
hear










7 comments:

  1. You've really grasped the lanturne, haven't you? Nicely done.

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  2. Your words resonate with me on this day, thankyou.xx

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  3. Excellent lanturnes - shape and words. Bravo

    Clounds is, I presume, meant to be clouds?

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  4. Thanks TLH--- Once I got started (and I used the computer centered function) it became quite addicting.

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  5. Jessie-So glad you stopped by and even better that my words found a place with you.

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  6. Viv- Thanks for the comment and the keen eye. Spell check your fired.

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  7. They are addicting, aren't they?! I think that is why when one writes several, they work together as well as singly. One can say a lot with this form, as you have, with only a few words.

    margo

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