Monday, July 04, 2011

independence

July Small Stones
independence by Teri H Hoover


Brightly the little firefly
shares the dusky sky with the more demanding explosions of color.

Each end
as a  snapping cinder from a bonfire;
mirthfully  claiming the sky as they rise- 
and suddenly-gently surrendering to the air that enfolds them.
They float into their flicker and disappear.
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Brightly the little firefly
shares the dusky sky with the demanding explosions of color.

Each rising like a cinder from a bonfire;
mirthfully  claiming the sky as they rise- 
and suddenly-gently surrendering to the air that enfolds them.
They float into their flicker and disappear.

1 comment:

  1. Love the way you have captured this! Beautiful :)

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